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On the edge…Open Letter (Fiction)

​Dear Crush,

Here I stand watching you, the way you smile enthralls me deep into my soul. I look at you and everything, every little thing you do touches a part of me that I never knew existed.

You’re the handsome one, you’re the guy who rides the blue Porsche down the road, you’re the leader in church, you’re the tall guy who walks with a swag.You’ve got your life so put together, you’ve got your life well planned.

I stand here in my worn out jeans and black T-shirt staring as you laugh, you’re just way way out of my league, may be you’ll ask me to a date someday. Truth be told, it will be in my dreams

You have never noticed I exist, those pretty girls flock around you preening is what they do best.

I’ve got no chance. I have got no money, no dress, nothing but my pen and paper. I am not famous, you are. Thoughts of you keep me awake at night. I am on the ledge, on the verge of falling apart.

I am counting my losses.

You are just way out of my league.

Your Secret Admirer.


Music Prompt : Out of my league by Stephen Speaks. This song speaks of a man who is in love with a girl he can’t get. I had to see this with the eyes of a lady.

November Notes hosted by Rosema and Sarah.

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