Going Away

So I pack my suitcase
You ain’t gonna see me for a long time
You got so used to me
No more do you value  me

My suitcase and I
With a firm resolve not to take your crap
Going to the place where strange faces
Would make more sense.

So I pack the suitcase
And I will stay gone
Till you feel the emptiness in your soul
Till your heart bleed and your eyes rain
Till you come looking for me

In response to the daily prompt Suitcase

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17 thoughts on “Going Away

  1. Peaceful Journey says:

    You go girl:) Like the part about going to a place where strangers face make more sense…. sounds like a girl with a made up mind… pack those bags

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    1. Peaceful Journey says:

      Lol, I got it. I know she would be back but not until he feels the emptiness in his soul she says. I’m thinking that could be indefinitely 🙂

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  2. rosemawrites says:

    subtly fierce! yet it pierces the heart, too! 🙂 Love take on suitcase, Deb. 🙂 Love these:
    Till you feel the emptiness in your soul
    Till your heart bleed and your eyes rain
    Till you come looking for me

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      1. Soul Gifts says:

        Don’t swweat it – it doesn’t have to be huge like mine. I always seems to go in the deep end 🙂 Google is fantastic for finding quotes – just type it into the search bar “quotes about ….” You’ll get heaps 🙂

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